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David Farland’s Daily Kick in the Pants—The “Time Bomb” Exercise
David Farland
Written by David Farland   
Friday, 27 August 2010 21:46

Update on Writer's Forum:

The new Writer's Group Forum is almost ready to launch. I, Talespin Jim, emailed a Questionnaire for everyone to fill out who is interested in being placed in a writing group. The purpose of the Questionnaire is to find the best group for you.

If you didn't receive your Questionnaire, you can email me at This e-mail address is being protected from spambots. You need JavaScript enabled to view it and I will send you one, or you can pick one up at the construction forum at,
http://www.amberdine.com/forum/showthread.php?tid=58, and email it to me.

If you haven't already asked to be in the writing groups, no problem, just send me the Questionnaire.

Finding just the right group for hundreds of people this weekend is going to be wild, if I get committed, you'll know why.

By the way, if you don't like your group, you are free to change to one of your choosing at any time. So give it a spin, see if this works out for you.

By the way, I forgot to ask on the Questionnaire what age group you write for. If you think of it, add that information to it. But if you've already sent your Questionnaire in, don't worry about, unless it's important to you to be grouped with writers who also write to that age group. For example, children's authors might all like to be grouped together. In that case, add it to the Questionnaire and email it to me again. Be sure to tell me you are RE-submitting it, otherwise I might accidentally put you in two different groups. Sorry about forgetting that, I tried so hard to think of everything but I have this teeny-weeny, little brain.

People have been asking about what's going to happen after they submit the Questionnaire. As soon as the forum is ready, I am going to announce it on the construction forum and I'm going to send out a special Daily Kick email, just announcing that the forum is ready for you to sign up.

I need everyone to sign up ASAP. The forum will be locked so all you can do is sign up at this time. I expect it will take a few days for most of the people to sign up, so we'll give everyone a chance to do it.

Then the coders will work their magic and put everyone into their private writing groups that I will have picked out for you.

Meanwhile I will start a thread you can read on the forum, where I will post everyone's screen name who has signed up thus far in alphabetical order, followed by your writing group number. You will also already have a leader assigned to your group.

Once we're done putting everyone into their groups, we'll open the forum for fun and frolic and you can all go in and start posting and chatting. The first thing your leaders should do is work with your private group to choose a group name and choose your group rules.

At that point, anyone who wants to change groups can either let me know and I'll change them, or they can talk to other group leaders and those group leaders can add them to their group. There will be a forum for groups looking for more people and another forum for people looking for a group, whichever way you want to use it.

One thing that's very important is that you fill out and update your user profile and choose if you want email alerts. Group leaders will be looking at your profile to see if they want to ask you to join their group.

Sorry for the long interruption. Here's David Farland...

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David Farland’s Daily Kick in the PantsThe "Time Bomb" Exercise

One way to increase tension in a story is to create what is called a "Time Bomb." A time bomb of course is any event that puts a time limit on an act that has to be accomplished. It’s taken from an old Alfred Hitchcock story about a man who gets up in the morning and shaves, and as he packs his briefcase, he sets a time bomb into it, then goes to work, where he promptly enters a board room and sets the briefcase under a table. The audience knows when the bomb is going off, but as a dozen people come into the officeeach with his or her own nasty temperament and personalitywe’re left to wonder who is meant to be the victim of the attack. Sometimes the time bomb in a story is so important that it becomes the focus of a story. You’ve probably seen a romantic comedy where a young man or woman inherits a vast sum of money

on the condition that they find a suitable spouse within a month. You’ve also seen the thriller where a serial killer must be caught "before he strikes again," and of course if an asteroid is going to strike the earth in three days, our hero had darned well better fly up in a spaceship and blow it to smithereens before then.

The important thing with having a deadline is that the "bomb must go off." You as an author set up a rule, and then you must keep to it. Otherwise the audience will feel cheated.

So here is the exercise for today: Look at a story that you have. Consider your primary and secondary plot lines, and look for ways to increase the tension by adding a "time bomb."

So you look at your story and ask yourself: Is my character hoping to get into a major school? If so, when is the deadline to apply for a grant? What complications might arise that would keep him from applying on time.

Is he hoping to get engaged to Sophie? What reason might she have for giving him a deadline? (Note: it might not have to do with her. Perhaps it’s a little thing
such as he hopes to get his "perfect" engagement ring re-sized before he asks her to marry him.)

Well, I’d write more about this, but it's almost five-o'clock and if I don’t get my work done for the day, my wife is going to clobber me!

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Seven Secrets Of Highly Creative Writers
LifeWriting Articles
Written by Steven Barnes   
Friday, 27 August 2010 21:44

The Lifewriting™ approach to your writing career demands a relatively high creative output. It isn't designed to coddle people who nurse a single story for years before sending it out.

But students often protest that they simply don't come up with many good ideas, and that the ideas they do generate are appropriate for novels.

 

In my opinion, basic ideas have no intrinsic length. The TREATMENT of an idea has an intrinsic length. The Civil War can be treated in a one-page story, on in a library of books. It all depends on the skill and intent of the writer.

Let me tell you a story:

When I was in college, I knew a woman who wanted to be a writer. She told me that she was working on a short story, and I said "great." A few weeks later, I asked her how the story was going. She said "It's getting a little longI think it's a novella."

"Great!" I said.

A couple of months later, I asked her how the novella was going. "Well, it's getting a little long, I think it's a novel!"

"Wow!" I said, although a warning bell was tinkling at the back of my mind. A couple of years later, I asked her how the novel was going.

"Well, it seems to be turning into a trilogy,"

she said.

Hmm. I made optimistic sounds, and left it at that.

A decade later, I was traveling on the East Coast, and knew I'd be passing the town where this lady lived. My wife and I stopped in to visit. Just because I have a masochistic streak, I asked how the trilogy was going.

There was a pause. Then, sheepishly she said, "I got tired of it, and put it away. But just a couple of months ago I started working on a new story. It's good! But" she said, as I knew she would, "it seems to be getting a little long…"

That is so sad. My friend had encountered one of the stealthiest forms of writer's block: to be able to write, but not be able to finish and submit. It serves the same purpose to an insecure subconscious: it prevents you from suffering rejection.

After all, the idea is so bright and appealing when it enters your mind! The process of actually slogging your way through multiple drafts can be a joy-killer.

Short stories are a perfect means to combat this.

A short piece employs all the same basic tools that will be used in a novel, with a crucial difference. In the time it takes you to write a hundred thousand word novel, you can write twenty to forty short stories, and you'll learn vastly more about your craft in the process.

Also, because you are going through the complete arc of generating story, planning, researching, writing rough draft, polishing, and submitting, you find out where your technical and psychological weaknesses lie.

And yet another advantage: if you write a story a week, or every other week, you don't need to cling desperately to an idea, thinking it is the only good idea you'll ever have.

But how to generate ideas? Here are some

suggestions:

 

1) Keep a dream diary. A little digital or tape

recorder at the bedside works great for this.

Just tell yourself before sleep that you will briefly

awaken after a dream and dictate the essence.

In the morning, transcribe.

2) Search the newspaper. Make an exercise of

looking through the various sections of the paper,

looking for odd or interesting stories. Imagine

how it would be to be the people caught up in

these situations. What story would capture the

essence of their lives?

3) Read books and watch movies. Imagine

grafting the end of one film to the beginning of

another. When a book falls apart, come up with

a better ending
and write it.

4) Create modern versions of favorite old fairy

tales. Have fun with this
remember, it's just

practice!

5) At the next family reunion or gathering, get

the old folks to talk about their youthful days.

6) Go to a playground and watch children playing.

Really notice the power games, the sharing, the

crying, the laughter, the struggles and triumphs.

Every single child, every day, has a story to tell.

7) Mine your own life. Learning to walk, to talk, to

drive, to win, to lose. Your first fight, your first

kiss, your first job, the first time you got fired.

There is really no end to the possibility. All you

need is a belief in your goals, and the recognition

that any individual story is just a step along the

way
not some soul-searing win-or-lose proposition.

Have fun!

Dark Dream

 

906 Ashworth Pl

Glendora, CA

91741

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David Farland’s Daily Kick in the Pants—Agents, My Final Word
David Farland
Written by David Farland   
Friday, 27 August 2010 21:43

I’ve had several questions about agents in the past few weeks, and I’ve grown weary of them. So I’m going to write one little article, and then not talk about it for awhile. I realize that new writers are joining the list every day, but they’ll just have to wait.

If you read a lot in the industry, you know that Dean Wesley Smith has talked extensively on the notion that you don’t "need" an agent to sell your books. He’s right. You don’t. If you’re a beginning writer, in most genres you can sell without an agent. If you’re a seasoned writer, even more doors open for you. I know writers like L.E. Modesitt that have perfectly good careers without agents.

Unfortunately, many new writers lack self-confidence, so they’re looking for something to boost their egos. Approbation from a seasoned agent or worthy professional might help, but I fear that sometimes giving compliments is like putting a band-aid over a gushing carotid artery. It doesn’t help much. The new writer keeps fishing for more and more compliments, when what he or she really needs is to calm down, look at things rationally, and find self-confidence from within. Having an agent shouldn’t be a simple status symbol or ego boost, it’s a working relationship between folks in the publishing business.

So you don’t need an agent at all. You especially don’t need a bad agent. A very few agents are nothing more than criminals, offering to represent authors for outrageous sums of money. I was contacted a couple of years back by a young man who had only $9000. He wasn’t sure whether to use the money to finish his college education or pay it to an agent in Denver who offered to represent him. I told him to finish college.

In truth, most agents are honest, but agents can be bad. bad for various reasons: some have poor negotiating skills and will sell an author’s work too quickly for too little money; others have poor taste; others just haven’t established the contacts you need, and so on. In fact, there are agents that might just be a bad fit for YOU, and they can be perfectly fine for others.

But then there are the good agents and the great agents, and though you don’t "need" them to have a career, you definitely want them and you should seek them out. Here are a few reasons why:

First, a good agent will have worked for several years in the industry and will have built up a long list of clients. This list will first include editors who trust the agent’s taste well enough to give a new manuscript a favorable read. If my agent tells a publisher, "This book is a potential blockbuster, and the auction starts at a million dollars," then several publishers will listen. If you tell those publishers that "the auction starts at a million dollars," the chances are excellent that they will laugh at you in derisioneven if we’re talking about the very same manuscript!

An agent will not only have relationships with editors, but he’ll know which ones match your tastes, which publishers can offer the best advances along with the strongest marketing capacity, and will be aware of other intangibles at a publisher.

Beyond that, the agent has connections to foreign agents who will sell your work. My agent, Russell Galen, for example, has Danny Baror sell his foreign rights, and if I recall correctly, Danny has contracts with a dozen sub-agents. So Danny might cover the German territory himself, but he’ll send my book out to agents in France, England, Italy, and so on. Each of those agents also has contacts in the industry. You might get a little agent in Romania who knows every single publisher in his region
and he’ll send your work on to other publishers beyond, say to Bulgaria, Croatia, or Yugoslavia. Your Italian agent might send works to Israel, or Pakistan.

So when you work with an agent, you are entering a network of contacts. My agent knows dozens of editors across the U.S. His foreign agents know literally hundreds of editors around the world. When I work with my agent, I’m suddenly hiring not just one man, but a small army.

Beyond that, my agent knows more than just editors and other agents. A good agent will also work with a Hollywood agent or lawyer, so that you can get some expertise there. My agent also knows dozens of independent movie producers, and so he can recommend my work to them. He may also have contacts in the videogame, or other places of interest.

Very often, if times are hard, an agent might recommend an author for a job.

Beyond all of that, a great agent will have publishing expertise to offer. Some agents take a real hands-on approach to manuscripts and will try to push their authors to write on par with or better than the best in their fields. So you might get writing advice or your agent might help you map out a career path, as you both look for ways to maximize your potential income.

You will also benefit from the fact that an agent can often negotiate better contracts for you than you can yourself. He should know the publisher well enough so that he knows what to watch for in the publisher’s contracts, and he should be able to handle tough negotiations better than an author
who frequently is so desperate that any offer sounds like a good offer.

An established agent might have helpful contacts for you besidesdo you need a publicist? A coach? A book doctor? Your agent might have a list of such contacts. Then of course you may have real problems with your publisher from time to time, and it helps to have an agent talk on your behalf. For example, a friend of mine recently had a book cover that was rather bland, so his agent called the publisher and fought to get a new cover, which boosted sales immensely. Having your agent handle small things like that frees you to spend more time being productive

as a writer.

So look for an agent. When you find one, be good. Treat them as a partner in your affairs, showing the courtesy and respect for their help.

But be aware that your goals as an author and your agent’s goals may sometimes be at odds. An agent gains the trust and respect of his or her publishers by knowing the markets. If you write a book that is substandard, one that doesn’t enhance your reputation or the agent’s, then the question arises for the agent, "How hard do I push this book?"

Let’s say that you’re writing a bestselling fantasy series, making a million dollars a book. Suddenly you as an artist get a yearning to switch genres and write a little science fiction novel. Should your agent sell it? Should he put it up for auction and demand a million dollars for it, knowing that in today’s market it might not make $50,000? To do so would be to damage his own reputation while encouraging you to throw away a career that you’ve spent years building.

The sensible thing, of course, is for the agent to try to reason with you, talk you into making yourself more money.

Thus, most agents when put in that position will try to discourage the author from changing course, and that’s where many fights between agents and authors begin
as an argument over a proposed change to a career course.

I’m not going to advise you on what to do there. Your taste in stories will likely grow and change over the course of a career, and you have to learn to balance that with your monetary needs and reputation.

Recognize also that opportunities will come to you outside of your agent’s connections. As you begin to write, you may well find that you’ve garnered millions of fans
and some of them will come to you with unique and exciting opportunities. That doesn’t necessarily mean that you’ve outgrown your agent. It just means that you network is expanding.

So look for a great agent, and try to build it into a great partnership.

 
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