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David Farland’s Daily Kick in the Pants—Crap on Film
David Farland
Written by David Farland   
Tuesday, 07 September 2010 10:05

Update on Writer's Forum:

We've launched the Farland's Writers' Groups Forum. You can find it at
http://farlandswritersgroups.com. If you're interested, go there and look around or sign up.

Even if you joined the old construction forum or sent me, Talespin Jim, a filled out Questionnaire, you still have to register for this forum.

Now, if you want me to put you into a group, you have to both register for the new forum and send me a filled out Questionnaire. Email me and ask for one at This e-mail address is being protected from spambots. You need JavaScript enabled to view it .

To answer the question everyone's asking, I think it will take me until about the weekend to get the groups all chosen up. At this point new Questionnaires are still coming in about as fast as I can sort them.

Even if you're going to be late getting a Questionnaire or you are behind on reading the Kick and don't see this until a week or two late, I can still put you into a group, so just email me when you can.

So far I have about 210 people to put into groups. I know there's a bunch of you out there who have not sent in your Questionnaires, but who've told me they want to join.

I've responded to everyone who sent me a Questionnaire to let you know I've received it. If I didn't send you a response, then I haven't received it. Send it again.

I need you to both send me a filled out Questionnaire and join the new Farland's Writers' Groups Forum before I can put you into a group. So remember to do both. Thank you.

Sorry for the long interruption. Here's David Farland...

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David Farland’s Daily Kick in the PantsCrap on Film

I walked out on a movie over the weekend. It was called Piranha 3D, and I’d looked forward to it for several reasons. First and foremost, a close friend did the 3D special effects, and I really wanted to check out his latest work. Second, I had heard that it was the best thing that the Weinstein brothers had on their slate for the summer, so I hoped it might rank with some of their better films (like Lord of the Rings, or Kill Bill). Third, it got a high rating on Rottentomatoes.com, and was called by one critic "the Avatar of B movies," though several critics warned about "breasts and gore."

So despite the warnings, I gritted my teeth. I can handle a gore-fest. Though I don’t seek out gore for entertainment, my dad did have a butcher shop when I was young, and there was many a day when I came home from work as a teenager literally covered in blood from head to toe. I’ve developed a high tolerance for blood, though I do have to admit that I’m weary of movies and books where people drink it.

What I did mind was the sexual content of the movie. It wasn’t romantic or lusty
more a gratuitous degradation of women that went from just wrong to something deeply perverse. I couldn’t wait to get out of the theater.

Back when I was a prison guard, we once got an inmate into the prison who would regale the guards and inmates with tales of women that he’d tortured and murdered. His accounts were so grotesque that even the most hardened of the inmates couldn’t tolerate his presence. After a couple of days of this, some twenty inmates jumped him and beat him within an inch of his life.

That’s the way that this movie made me feel
sickened to the point that I sort of hoped that someone will jump the director . . . and the producers, too. Maybe the movie got better after I left, but for me it was unsalvageable.

Perhaps I’ve just hit the wrong movies this summer, but there have been a lot of disappointments. I keep wondering, Is this the best that Hollywood can do? Aren’t there better stories to offer?

I’ve heard it said in Hollywood that "No one ever went broke underestimating the stupidity of the American public." People will pay to see anything, and apparently the filmmakers this year are out to prove the point.

I believe that we can do better, and it struck me today that the state of affairs in Hollywood is partly my fault. I can write a better screenplay than anything I’ve seen this summer. In fact, there are dozens of people on this list who consistently write better work than anything I’ve seen on the screen lately.

Most years, I can point to a handful of books or movies that inspire me to reach to new heights, but right now, I’m afraid that I’ve got nothing.

I don’t normally recommend using contempt as a motivator, but when it’s this plentiful . . . it’s like having an oilfield gushing in your backyard.

So if you you’re tired of the tasteless drivel we’re getting, if you recognize that Hollywood keeps promoting this crud because they think we’re foolish and perverse, fight back.

Make it a point TODAY to write something you can be proud of!

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David Farland’s Daily Kick in the Pants—Writing for Hire
David Farland
Written by David Farland   
Tuesday, 07 September 2010 09:44

Update on Writer's Forum:

We've launched the Farland's Writers' Groups Forum. You can find it at
http://farlandswritersgroups.com. If you're interested, go there and look around or sign up.

Even if you joined the old construction forum or sent me, Talespin Jim, a filled out Questionnaire, you still have to register for this forum.

Now, if you want me to put you into a group, you have to both register for the new forum and send me a filled out Questionnaire. Email me and ask for one at This e-mail address is being protected from spambots. You need JavaScript enabled to view it .

I've now printed out every Questionnaire I've received and this morning I'm starting to sort them into groups.

Even if you're going to be late getting a Questionnaire or you are behind on reading the Kick and don't see this until a week or two late, I can still put you into a group, so just email me when you can.

So far I have about 186 people to put into groups. I know at least 30-50 more people wanted to be grouped, so there's a bunch of you out there who have not sent in your Questionnaires.

I've responded to everyone who sent me a Questionnaire to let you know I've received it. If I didn't send you a response, then I haven't received it. Send it again.

I need you to both send me a filled out Questionnaire and join the new Farland's Writers' Groups Forum before I can put you into a group. So remember to do both. Thank you.

Sorry for the long interruption. Here's David Farland...

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David Farland’s Daily Kick in the PantsWriting for Hire

If you let other people know that you’re a writer, the chances are excellent that they will a) want free writing lessons, b) want you to write their life story, c) want you to collaborate on a book, d) will want you to write some nonfiction.

In many cases, such people actually have the resources to hire you outright, but you won’t know that unless you do a little digging. So you need to let the potential employer know that you’re a professional who gets paid.

Yet all too often, new writers are afraid to say, "So why don’t you write me a check?"

I think that the reason for this is that when you become a writer, you do it by degrees. You study, you practice, you gain some notoriety. But in those early days, no one puts a sticker on your head and says, "Now you’re a real writer."

Instead, we’re often left to feel like we’re pretenders. Here are some things to think about if you feel insecure asking for money:

1) A writer is a skilled professional. In order to become a writer, I went to college and studied writing, editing, and literature for several years. I practiced writing and editing for years beyond that, and went on to enter and win contests, gain awards, and become an international bestselling author. It takes the average writer about seven years to perfect his or her craft to the point that he or she sells. It takes another seven years for the typical author to become a bestseller (if you make it that far). On average, to become a bestselling writer takes a little more time than it does to become a neurosurgeon. So if you’re somewhere along that career path, don’t sell your skills at a wage commensurate with a starting employee at McDonald’s.

2) You can find some fairly established guidelines for what you should ask for a job in just about any industry given your level of expertise. Not all jobs are equal. When I’m presented with an offer, I look at how much it pays, whether I think the job would be fun, how much work it will take, how much notoriety it might bring, and so on. There’s no real formula to follow. I just go with my gut feeling. This year I took a job writing a screenplay in China. The money was okay, but the travel, the experience, and the fun made it worthwhile for me. On the other hand, I turned down a job writing a huge video game because the time obligations would have been a killer.

3) Finally, look at your own costs. You might say, "Well, I have a computer and a desk, so I don’t have any real costs." But the truth is that you have all of your costs of living while you do a project
food, housing, utilities, and so on. For most of my freelance jobs with technical writing and editing, or for writing fiction, I would bid on the job by the project. For example, I might say, "I’ll write that middle-grade novel for $5000." I’d always ask for 50% of the money up front, and I’d always get it. I’ve only had a couple of instances where I had trouble collecting on the back end. In both cases, it was for startup companies that ultimately failed. So even though I didn’t collect my back-end easily, I did get out of the deals pretty well unscathed.

As a writer, it’s easy to justify the position that you deserve to be paid like a professional. Once you establish that, you need to create a contract.

The contract should have the following elements:

1) Create a contract in which your business partner states that they wish to retain your services as a writer. This contract should name both parties and give their addresses.

2) The second paragraph of the contract should state what the job is to be and when it should be done. For example, I might say, "Wolverton will write a 120-page user’s manual/with illustrations and screen shots, and will perform two rewrites based upon editing suggestions, with the work to be completed no later than December 1, 2010."

3) The third paragraph should state when you will be paid. Normally, this would be 50 percent down, and 50 percent upon approval, with a deadline date added in case your employer gets bogged down in the approval process. However, it’s also common to work for an hourly rate, and normally I would simply present a bill for hours worked and expect payment within a week or two after presenting the bill.

4) Last, there should always be an exit strategy. If the company decides that they don’t want the work done after all for some reason, or if you as the writer decide that you can’t work with them, you need to provide mutual terms that let you both off the hook gracefully.

5) At that point, you sign and date the contract.

In most cases, your work-for-hire contracts don’t need to be elaborate affairs. I try to keep them under a page. I think that my old contracts for work with Lucasfilm for Star Wars were my longest. They ran two pages, but that was because they wanted to make sure that I knew that they were getting all rights to the property. When I worked on some Mummy novels, the contracts were only a page.

So when someone finds out that you’re a writer and begins to prod to see if you want to work with them, be a professional. Tell them that you’d love to talk with them, and let them know that you’ll want to learn the scope of the project and set up a contract. Those who aren’t in a position to hire you will quickly bow out of the conversation, but ultimately you can have some fun and make a little money.

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Calling All Writers--It's 'Party' Time!
LifeWriting Articles
Written by Steven Barnes   
Tuesday, 07 September 2010 09:41

"Do I contradict myself? Very well, then, I contradict myself.

I am large, I contain multitudes." -- Walt Whitman, Song of Myself

The dedicated writing student must continually search for tools to explore the core balance of plot, character, and poetics, multiple ways of climbing the great, misty mountain called story. But the major difference between Lifewriting™ and other systems is that we concentrate on the tools from writing that also help us understand our lives…or the tools from psychology or spiritual disciplines that help us understand our craft.

With that in mind, the Parts Party from Ericksonian hypnosis is worth exploring. The "Parts Party" is a powerful tool created by Carol Erickson, the daughter of Milton Erickson, the master hypnotist largely responsible for legitimizing hypnosis in the therapeutic community. Basically, the Parts Party technique is used with a client who lacks access to her own internal resources, or is dealing with values conflicts. Placed in trance, the client is invited to imagine a cocktail party. Each "guest"

is a personification of a different aspects--or "parts"

-- of her personality. In other words, "Ambition"?

Meet "Compassion." "Passion"? Meet "Self-Respect."

The therapist can then engage in what is called "Zero Content Therapy" where a client is led to heal herself without specific intervention.

An example would be a client of mine who was terrified to perform in a singing competition, despite months of practice. The competition would begin in mere hours, and I was brought in as a last-ditch emergency effort. I placed her in a trance, and established a communications signalraising the right finger for a "yes" and the left for a "no." Then I invited her to imagine a party, at which among the guests she would find Ambition, Fear, The Artist, Her Younger Self, and Her Future Self. I impressed upon her that the nausea and shaking she experienced when contemplating her performance was just her own inner guardians trying to protect her.

And yet, there was another part of her that truly, deeply, wanted to prepare for a singing career. I suggested that if there was a way for her to satisfy the need for safety and also enjoy performing, that that would be a desirable outcome. Then I asked her future selfthe one who was a professional singer (her goal) to hostess the party, to introduce the various aspects to one another, and then to let them talk it out. After ten minutes, she signaled that the conversation was over, I brought her out of the trance

and she jumped up and said "let's do it!" with a verve I'd never seen from her. She blew the roof off at the recital! I never asked her exactly what conversation had gone on…in fact, it was none of my business.

A story is much the same. As one famous writing technique says, "A story is an argument in a story mind." In other words, every secondary character exists as a shadow aspect of the main character's personality. If the conflicts between them can be resolved, the character gets to move to the next level of her life.

Seen this way, in The Godfather, various characters represent Michael Corleone's ambition, love for family, spirituality, venality, passion, homicidal nature, and so forth. Watching these different aspects "work out" their differences is a fascinating process, leading ultimately to Michael's utter defeat and destruction at the end of the third film.

As you craft a film, book, or story, looking at it as a "Parts Party" can be an extremely useful tool. It also allows you to enter the realm of the most primal and powerful story, the Therapeutic Metaphor, where a story is structured to create a change in the mind of the reader or viewer.

Here is the suggestion: write your first draft with no concern for anything but story and character.

Then, in the process of re-write, search for meaning.

Try to gain a sense of what your unconscious mind was up to, what you were trying to say.

What is your thesis and counter-thesis? Once this has been determined, look at your characters again. Who is the main character? What aspects of her personality might the other characters represent? Now the conflicts between them can be seen as external versions of the internal struggles we all endure as we try to change, grow, and heal. Those actions and words can provide the lessons necessary to grow (remember the gathering of Allies and Powers on the Hero's

Journey?)

Your character may succeed, or may fail. Or may fail to get what they want, and instead get what they need. These are your choices, based upon your beliefs about human nature and the ethical structure of the universe. Controlling the secret meaning of your subsidiary characters can be an incredibly powerful way of creating meaning and emotional depth to your work…and speaking to your reader's deeper consciousness without being polemical.

When you do this, there is another wonderful result.

You are also speaking to yourself, your own inner wisdom. And you develop sensitivity to the multitudes within us all. During quiet moments of meditation, or in the "hypnogogic" state between waking and sleep, you will hear voices within you.

How powerful it can be to identify the voices as aspects of our personalities as well as positive or negative figures from our past! This approach is perfect for Lifewriting™ because it allows a writer to strengthen the connection between the inner and outer worlds. When you look at your craft in this fashion, everything that you do to improve and heal yourself automatically makes you a better writer…and everything you write automatically increases your integration as a human being.

And that is a worthy goal. THAT is Lifewriting™.

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